Please music translation Thai

[Poeta1984]

My darling, if, by brushing your hair
By fondling your dewlap
By singing lullabies,
I put you to sleep, on my laps
My love, if, without falling for destiny,
by being paper and pencil,
by finding an end with happiness,
I wrote you at my very end
I would not trade with anything
Your eyes, looking with love
Even at my last moment
I have to speak about my love
I would not trade with anything
The days passing with you
At my very last moment, yet,
I need to hold your hands
My love...

[djaidee]

[Marie]

My darling, if, by brushing your hair
By fondling your dewlap
By singing lullabies,
I put you to sleep, on my laps
My love, if, without falling for destiny,
by being paper and pencil,
by finding an end with happiness,
I wrote you at my very end
I would not trade with anything
Your eyes, looking with love
Even at my last moment
I have to speak about my love
I would not trade with anything
The days passing with you
At my very last moment, yet,
I need to hold your hands
My love...

First of all, thanks for posting here.

I just wish to clarify: What exactly do you want us to do with your post? Translate it to Thai? Or what? I am confused because there's that word "music" in your title.

Rather than belabor to compose verses that do not sound so clear and so difficult to translate, why not adopt some ready-made poems in Thai. If I remember right this has been suggested to you with an accompanying link-or links-in another thread. I imagine your "muse" will appreciate that better.

Your effort is admired, though. Good day!:-)

[tom123]

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